This a Creative Writing Day! Students will create two different poems using all five senses. There will be time in the afternoon to use the brand new state-of-the-art computer facilities to present your poems both as a booklet and a slide show.
Thursday, 21 August 2008
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Creative writing was cool i loved doing the chocolate poem as every one wanted a piece of cake and the teacher wouldnt let them but i knew before the lesson that they got cake and they was going to have it as i had to keep it a secret
creative writing day was excelent especially the bit where we were given chocolate cake.
I'm looking to alton towers.
yesterday we did creative writing and ate chocolate cake.
yesterday was alright. i liked it when all the class got to eat the chocolate cake. i mean the chocolate was delicious.
cant wait till Alton towers
Creative writing was good yesterday. It was better when we went on the computers.
The chocolate cake poem was good as we got to eat chocolate cake!
Creative writing was a bit fun apart from Mrs.Tringham being a bit over enthusiastic. But I did enjoy eating the chocolate cake.
I quiet liked yesterday, the chocolate cake poem, especially, I did like the other rain poem, but it was abit boring...
I just liked typing all my poems up, so yesterday was quiet good.
Well creative writing was cool,espcially the part when Mrs. Tringam told us that a cake was for her friends wedding but it wasn't, it was for us!
I think that this morning, to be honest is going to be quite boring, because we already did it on Wednesday!
The best thing about yesterday was going on the computers and doing some poems.
yesterday was pretty fun to say it was writing.we ate chocolate cake and went on computers that kind of stuff.
creative writing day was wicked!!especially the time we ate the chocolate cake!mmmmmmmmmm. 2 days to go for ........ ALTON TOWERS
yesterday was great because we did some poem and then the best bit of all was eating the yummy chocolate cake.
YESTERDAY:we were makeing pomems in the morning and type them on the computer.
TODAY:we are rasing our cars
yesterday was quite fun because we got to eat the cake it was really nice and a bit sickly to but i was hungry so i just eat the cake
it was quite borin to when we did the literacy bit do not like literacy miss tringham was funny dough
yesterday was better than i thought it would,even if we were writing and we all ate chocolate cake
Yesterday, we made 2 poems 1 about a chocolate cake and another about a rain stick, we had fun typing them up on the computer. Danny was acting an idiot with 2 other girls and he is still anoying today.
I can't wait till monday to drag claire on the rides at Alton Towers.
yes today was a really good sesion and the best bit was when we got to eat the chocolate cake and that was the best thing in thwe world!!!!!!!
creative writing was ok it wasen't that bad.I enjoyed writing the two poems.
I'm looking forward to today and alton towers.
Yesterday was not as good because wwe had to right but atleast i got some CAKE!!!!!!!!!
it was boring at the beging but near the begining of lunch time
we all had choclate CAKE it
was nice and every one wanted to
eat a nother peace and no wone
had there diner there was a lot
left it was still boring after
the peace of the cake.
Yesterday, we did an activity called Creative Writing and it was really good because we got to write a poem about Rain and a Chocolate cake!
First we had to listen to a rain stick then we had to write a poem about the delite of it. The second one we had to taste a chocolate cake then write a poem about what it tasted like!
creative writing was okkay, but the bonus was eating the chocolate that miss tringham brought!!
writing was better than i expected it is one of the best so far
I carnt wait for today
Creative writing day was bad so i give it 2 out of 10 . I like the cake .
Yesterday we did creative writing. It was reasonably good, but there was one main incident which really got on my nerves. The teacher gave us each a piece of chocolate cake and told us we were not allowed to eat it. Then, for 10 minutes, she kept saying things like ‘The lovely chocolaty delicious creamy cake’. This kept tempting us all to eat it. Then, she said we could. Just one problem. Mr Allen gave me a nivel cuisine (I probably spelt that wrong) sized piece. Mr Armitage saw it and gave me a bigger piece. Only it was massive. I only ate half and gave the other half to Lewis Platts(That really pleased him). Obviously the teachers can’t read between the lines. The day got 8.3 out of 10.
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